Head Hopping

Otherwise known as an over-abundance of POV (point of view) changes.

I’m in the midst of reading a Regency (not Regency-set); however, had I known it was a straight-up Regency I wouldn’t have bought it.  That’s what I get for not paying attention to the spine of the book.  Now, just because it’s an old-school Regency doesn’t automatically mean Continue reading

Revisiting My First Manuscript

When I wrote my first story (TCH) and was so excited to put it out there for all the world to see. I had no idea what “head-hopping” meant. HA! After I joined FCRW (First Coast Romance Writers), my education began. I’m so embarrassed, in hindsight, to have submitted that ms to several prominent agents and editors. Continue reading